We Tell Stories – Horror Short Film

Amazing, guys! Congrats to everyone involved!

I enjoyed the dynamic between Vicki's charisma, Dana's reserved nature, Walter's down-to-earth – and most of all, Craig keeping the vibes positive+fun and holding the group down

Play with fire your going to get burned

The Pros= Well this may not be 'The Stew' as those where acted by actual professional actors but the acting in this short is still pretty good for what it is and not just that but also I really appreciate how much meat that are on each character. So much so by the end I kind of want to learn more of each character's past before the events of this film and not just that but also I was actually rooting for some of the characters. And now moving on I feel that the grittiness really works in this short's favor along with the various camera angels.

And loved the gore make-up at the end. And as for the length of the runtime I never really felt like it was 41 minutes in fact to me it felt more like 15 or less minutes. And I really like the design and costume on the demon? Phantom? So much so that I really wished that the Phantom would not only be there maybe unseen by the characters but always seen by us the audience for the entire short narrating. And maybe making it look like they're the one that's moving the game piece (I honestly don't know what it's called?) Just by simply moving their arms and hands. And it's also great that you had an LGBTQ character repetitive in this short I think that community needs a little more representation. And oh I almost forgot I also really like how all of the characters are not only identifiable in one way or another. But also they all feels so realistic which ties in to the identifiable part of it all. And that should do it for the pros for now unless I'm forgetting anything else.

The Cons= The only cons that I could detect is that I Personally Feel that at some parts through the short the reactions of the characters where down played or under reacted a little bit. And that should do it for the cons for now unless I'm forgetting anything else.

The Mixed= Although I do like the ending it's true but however I feel that a much more fitting to have a supernatural type of ending providing that you had enough in your budget. But if you didn't hare's what I would have done. I would have just simply have her convulse while using the blood and gore make-up and then have her vanish. And yes technically you did use some sort of supernatural effect at the end there. But it was used to summon the Phantom and not as part of letting the final player go. And that should do it for the mixed for now unless I'm forgetting anything else.

Final Thoughts= And Remember these are just my own thoughts and opinions and yours could be different and that's fine by me. And that should do it for now unless I'm forgetting anything else.

8/10

This was really cool !!

I am so sad I missed this yesterday. This is what I've been waiting for!

Happy Halloween

Duuuuude!!!! This was fuking sick!!! I loved it!!! Ugh that was dark, and amazing! Lol. It fkn rocked!!!! 😄🤘

Made me think of Sartre—“hell is other people.”

Know this features homosexual actors.

FUUUUUCK! 🔥🔥🔥💯👍

Yea this is definately influenced by The Room😄, naw I’m watchin on….

You lost me at septum ring in the nose thumbnail. 🤣

This was so much fun to be a part of! It came out awesome!

Damn,this was really a good and unexpected horror short film from the Secret Galaxy crew.Also,Greg should of left that game in the dumpster.

The color shading looks like Ai. The actors look familiar.

I was going to quote "How do you burn a Luigi Board" but seeing as this is a Ziriya Board, I'm going to change it to "How do you burn a Zendaya Board?"

That ending really made me laugh actually

Sorry guys, but that’s 41 minutes of my life. I’ll never get back. When are you going to post more members only content? Or is this it?

Thank you for having me on as Walt! I had a great time

Horror?!? Oh, the horror!!

Is this posted for public consumption?

Look forward to this every year! 🎃👍🏻